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PostSubject: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:01 pm

Name: Red
Alliance: UNSCDF
Species:
UNSCDF: Human

Personality: hates the people above him that are think they are better. Started training young and a very skilled soldier, Red has been hired as a assassin, driver, and as a body guard. He always does his job like it is his last. Red has a very short temper so he usually stays to himself whenever he can.

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Weapons: Primary: Normal Halo shotgun; Secondary S.D.T.R. (sniper dream team rifle); Grenades: sticks x3, hedgehogs x3, frags x3


Rank: tank commander

Squad: na

Squad position: na

Team: na

Team posistion: na

Current Base: crows nest... i guess lol? (matt wants me to Very Happy)

Special Abilities: great driver, great shooter

Bio: Red grew up a trouble maker, he had no family around and was living on the streets. At the age 15 he got stealing food and he had an option to join the UNSCDF or be sent to a juvenile correctional facility for a few years. Not wanting to be locked up and feeling that no-one likes him he decided to join the UNSCDF to fight for all the other kids like him. While being at the bottom of the chain everyone hated him and made his life more than a living hell (thus why he hates most people above him).

Rp sample: while listening to his 3rd ipod touch (yes his 3rd.. the other ones had a bad ending) Red studied the enemies very closely through his scope 600 meters away. As the terrorists packed up the drugs to go make a deal worth several million dollars red swiftly hopped into his hog and stealthily pursued the dealers for hundreds of miles. once arriving to the deal Red camped out onto a nearby building and watched the whole thing. finally when the dealers were packing up to Red pulled the trigger rapidly and precisely on his SDTR eliminating all terrorists, but making sure the money and drugs were still usable.




P.S. if u need more info on something just tell me, someone was rushing me the whole time. not gonna mention any names *cough*matt a.k.a. demetri*cough*






WEAPON CREATION:
Name: S.D.T.R (Snipers Dream Team Rifle

Type: gun

Rank: lethal-moderate, which ever it fits into from word count

Fires: tank shells

Description: Looks just like a normal sniper rifle but packs more of a punch.. a long range weapon that shoots scorpion tank shells. made for snipers to be able to take out groups of enemies, our in some cases vehicles. with a 15 ft radius of blast, traveling at speeds of normal sniper rifle shells, this is one deadly sniper rifle. Specs: clips of 3 shells, very few exist due to the face that the goverment did not want them going around. also, very dangerous in close combat.


Origin: Some very smart guy decided to mod a normal sniper rifle to shoot scorpion tank shells for elite snipers





GRENADE CREATION:
Name: The Hedgehog grenade

Appearance: a black ball with black spikes sticking about 2 inches out. around the base of the spikes are yellow rings


Rank: moderate

Description: The Hedgehog grenade is thrown out like a normal grenade and when reaches destination it hovers a few feet above the air and shoots out spikes like a hedgehog spikes up in a bad situation


Origin: discovered from an alien race during an intense war

































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GRENADE CREATION:
Name: Food Grenade

Appearance: small square with pictures of food on the sides

Rank: low, but can b used very strategically

Description: upon using, the food grenade explodes harmlessly into what type it is (designed with different food). Ment for soldiers to use when stranded and need food. But soon became used in war, soldiers would throw to a group of covenant and the hungry aliens will start to fight over the food, and while they possible kill there own comrades, they are distracted so the spartans can kill.


Origin: this was created in scientific lab to replace MRE's


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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:28 pm

I am sorry but this is a terrible app so far.

  • You need way more on personality. Put it into a paragraph, not a few words.

    Way more on bio. That doesn't give us enough details about how he grew up, and how he lives now.

    I don't like your RP sample, but Shifty never made a limit so your ok.

    As far as your weapons go, if you don't make them in this thread, you will have to train them all separately. You can do whatever but it will be way more work.


Fix these and I will have another look.

Oh and make sure everything is in third person. Say "He" or "Red" not me or I

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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 4:33 pm

so its fine if i describe the weapons in this character creation?
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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:58 pm

Yes. You don't have to, but it would be easier for you to post them here, really I could care less.
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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:02 pm

okay, just makin sure.. ill have it finished in an hour maybe
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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:13 pm

you also need a brief description of your looks, not just a picture. Remove the Food Bomb thing since you won't be using it, and you need more on personality. Saying what you have will pretty much mean all he will say is "Hi I am Red. I am a bodygaurd and other things. I hate you." So take out the parts where it says what he is hired as, put that in bio. More origin for Headgehog grenade. Can you please fix your grammatical errors?

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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:55 pm

welll... fuck it, once the site is more active ill fix it
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PostSubject: Re: Red COMPLETED (maybe)   Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:56 pm

You lazy fucker. For that I will approve you and make you Death Match me. Yes, and I will rape the fuck out of you. No but really, it doesn't have to be perfect. C'mon just try.

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